Storyboard Encore

 The first week of break I wrote the Treatment roughly 2 Hours for 4 days, I then blurted out my plot to Alex, RUBBER DUCK METHOD, it works speaking it out to someone helped me process what I had written and where I needed to improve on with advice now and then From Alex. This coming week I will Write at least the rough script. _________________________________________________________________ Cloudy Day at the docks, Vern is minding the counter Bored out of his mind while Kora is in the back doing paperwork. He is chatting to Kora about how he knows she is fine with it but he is bored. A customer walks up and Vern is Happy to do something. He greets the client who requests for them to hold onto a package for a short while. Vern rolls the cylinder over asking Kora to take over the counter and calls Daize. Daize is bickering with Holli on how best to move a package, she thinks magic is better while daize thinks he should just shove it along. Vern's second call gets his attention...

I am Most Likely Behind but, I have done the RoadMap (Re-written with the advice I have gotten in the first week of break), this second week I am to do the bullet point treatment for the first three episodes. I decided to write the episode while only referencing my previous Road Map as the story was not working with the pacing I have been set with, Thus the re-write from start, in which I was able to get better pacing while keeping elements of what I originally versioned.  ________________________________________________________________________ Title: Service and Delivery Genre: Fantasy, Slice of Life Themes/Central Dimitic Argument: (Phrase as thesis/argument) A slice of life series focusing around 4 dragons as they struggle and learn to operate a small business while dealing with the past, their flaws and ambitions. Setting: Dragon Society In the central world: (Unnamed) Protagonist(s): Vern , Kora, Holli and Daize Super-Objective: Create a successful delivery service that opera...