Studio Project: Progress Update 26/4/22

 The first week of break I wrote the Treatment roughly 2 Hours for 4 days, I then blurted out my plot to Alex, RUBBER DUCK METHOD, it works
speaking it out to someone helped me process what I had written and where I needed to improve on with advice now and then From Alex.

This coming week I will Write at least the rough script.
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Cloudy Day at the docks, Vern is minding the counter Bored out of his mind while Kora is in the back doing paperwork. He is chatting to Kora about how he knows she is fine with it but he is bored. A customer walks up and Vern is Happy to do something. He greets the client who requests for them to hold onto a package for a short while.
Vern rolls the cylinder over asking Kora to take over the counter and calls Daize.

Daize is bickering with Holli on how best to move a package, she thinks magic is better while daize thinks he should just shove it along.
Vern's second call gets his attention  and he grumbles at Hollis smug reaction to her now being the one sorting this out. Daize brings up whether strength or magic is better and Vern dismisses the argument in favor of the cylinder package.

Vern explains the package and asks Daize to put it on the table at the back.

Daize takes the cylinder, drops it and picks it up again. (vern's reaction:an Ooo shit face)


Daize puts the cylinder on the table and turns to ask what it is, a slam and rumble is heard as Holli finishes shifting the crate to the back wall. Causing a blanket to fall off the shelf along with the package behind Daize, he goes on to taunt that just shoving it wouldn't have done that. 


Vern jokes at Daize before looking behind his and noticing the package is missing

Vern screeches at this and Daize turns around with a similar reaction. Daize scuffles around the area while Vern shoots questions at Daize.
Noticing the Chaos Kora suggests that they look before panicking. Daize said he did and Kora, unimpressed, looked around seeing the blanket. She laughs saying how they don’t look properly, but the cylinder isn’t under there. Kora looks and declars she can’t see it, Vern blurts out that if Kora cant find it their fucked.


Vern flies over and looks from the top of the shelf asking how the hell Daize already forgot where he put it, Daiz realizes that his memory isn’t that bad.

Holli walks over to Kora who looks anxious, Holli states that it's gonna be somewhere obvious and Kora gives a small laugh stating that probably yes.  But they are on a short time limit for when the package is meant to be picked up.
Vern and Daize look at each other and Vern states that they gotta find it fast, daize suggests that Vern searches high and Daize Searches low. 

Both dragons start messy tearing through the shop looking for the cylinder while Kora is calmly searching through the counter.


Holli brings up they have 5 more minutes spurring on the chaos.

A knock on the counter shows that a dragon is here to pick up the cylinder, Vern flies over to distract the client while he spurs Daize to hurry the fuck up. They both hear scuffling as they turn to see Holli shifting the table and pulling up the floor boards, Vern is very confused asking what she is doing before butting of to a ‘WHAT THE FUCK’ as she pulls the cylender out of the floor.


They hand off the package and Vern is now interrogating Holli on what, why and how the package was there. Holli explains to the two she assumed it was in the same location and used her magic to pick on the metallic package, to find that it had slipped under a loose floorboard, as to why she wanted to rub in Daizes face that her use of magic was much more useful than physical labor. Daize and Vern are both annoyed but Kora breaks them up before anything can happen.


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